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Alright. I like the hook- It says something bad has happened. However, I find that the first chapter is just a preview. And honestly, I don't like previews/prologues. In my mind, they are mainly for exposition dumps. The grammar is easy to follow and I do like her coming to terms with being isekai'd. This could use a bit more descriptions from the MC's point of view. You could tell us what details catches her eye. This could help define her character as well.

How The Princess Rewrote Her Tragic Ending

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thanks for the review