Review Detail of Sl23ga in Forever Destined to the Silver Shadow
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I started reading this because the reviews said that this story was awesome, but as I started to read it was rather a bit disappointing. I believe that this story is not actually that bad, referring to plot-wise it’s interesting and quite new, but the pace felt off, it was too fast for me, rushed. The writing felt off sometimes, and a bit too much (like for example in the first chapter when the FL said something about her ocean eyes or something like that). I want to clarify that I’m not trying to hate on you (author), I felt that this story is good (since even if I felt a bit uncomfortable with the story, the plot was interesting enough as to making me read through), so I wanted to point out some things that may help you improve. And I‘m sorry if I came off as rude, if you felt offended do tell me!
Forever Destined to the Silver Shadow
Riley_Steverose
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Thank you so much for your review.... I am learning from my mistakes, and thank you for pointing that out. And if you like my story, do give it a try. (I believe that the writing in my later chapters is better than the starting...) Even if you find any mistakes, feel free to point them out. Thank you
It’s normal, we evolve and writing isn’t easy. I do like your plot, and I’ll admit that it was maybe too soon to criticize anything (since I just read a few chapters), so please don’t take my words too seriously!
Riley_Steverose:Thank you so much for your review.... I am learning from my mistakes, and thank you for pointing that out. And if you like my story, do give it a try. (I believe that the writing in my later chapters is better than the starting...) Even if you find any mistakes, feel free to point them out. Thank you
Thank you for your feedback. I do appreciate constructive criticism. Deep down I want to improve too, so thank you for helping me with that. And do give my book a try... if you liked my plot. I believe that my later chapters are better than the initial ones.
Sl23ga:It’s normal, we evolve and writing isn’t easy. I do like your plot, and I’ll admit that it was maybe too soon to criticize anything (since I just read a few chapters), so please don’t take my words too seriously!