Translation is decent, not many errors in spelling/grammar. Updating should be stable as most webnovel books are when they are chosen. Story idea is very intriguing and has a lot of potential, if you enjoy reading books about other games and movies this is quite nice to read. Hopefully rest of book is also good. Character development hasnt been shown much in the 40 chapters as its mostly him just making dungeons and the others playing it, plus their reactions. World development is disappointing, apart from it being a parallel earth reality with dream/nightmare dungeons and the usual chinese biased, we are not told much about the world at all not even the cities the MC is in or the university he is attending. The whole ‘world’ development is only the dungeons. Hope this review is useful for those people deciding to read the book, among all the spammed negative comments with no explinations as to why.
Sister's Bride
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