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WorldDeity
WorldDeityLv133yr
2021-07-09 23:35

very good writing quality that could be further enhanced by changing how you write his thoughts,world background much known but nothing bad presently, character design is very good just needs more depth.

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Peternity
PeternityLv13

I wonder when people stop asking change in novels that are translated and not written here.

WorldDeity
WorldDeityLv13

oh i forgot but also it is for others to read the novel and those who want to write new novels to learn from

Peternity:I wonder when people stop asking change in novels that are translated and not written here.
Kentaro_Ken_6052
Kentaro_Ken_6052Lv3

this novel lacks excitement, thrill, and adventure. this is just the story of an incompetent mc. this is the first time I've wanted the mc to be beaten and flatten to the ground.

Veasna_TDM
Veasna_TDMLv11

why does everything has to be the same for you? Let other enjoy a peaceful cultivation story as well, okay. It is already rare for story where mc don't suffer injustice.

Kentaro_Ken_6052:this novel lacks excitement, thrill, and adventure. this is just the story of an incompetent mc. this is the first time I've wanted the mc to be beaten and flatten to the ground.
Kentaro_Ken_6052
Kentaro_Ken_6052Lv3

did i say that you should prefer novels that i liked, preferred, and wanted?! did i forbid anyone from reading other novels?! wth dude! it's voicing and expressing an opinion dude!. it's not like I'm ordering someone around to read what i want to read... next time try to understand first the meaning of the statement.

Veasna_TDM:why does everything has to be the same for you? Let other enjoy a peaceful cultivation story as well, okay. It is already rare for story where mc don't suffer injustice.
Lazy_Chicken_God
Lazy_Chicken_GodLv13

Is this a joke?

Kentaro_Ken_6052:did i say that you should prefer novels that i liked, preferred, and wanted?! did i forbid anyone from reading other novels?! wth dude! it's voicing and expressing an opinion dude!. it's not like I'm ordering someone around to read what i want to read... next time try to understand first the meaning of the statement.
cerby201
cerby201Lv12

well, I smiple enjoy the novel

GreatDaoofspace
GreatDaoofspaceLv15

Romance? Harem?

Klip
KlipLv4

there is barrly any romance and the action is limited but whenever it is there its amazing and exciting

GreatDaoofspace:Romance? Harem?
LostEra
LostEraLv15

yes and no, the mc will not engage with the ladies and voids relationships until je is strong enough. But he has the providence of an immortal emperor and looks very good and has high charm, this results in him collecting an harem even if doesn't want to (yet). By chapter 80 there is already 1 confession, one girl who calls him husband, a girl who forced him to become her Dao companion in the future and his incredibly beautiful teacher (or former teacher bc he became stronger than her) who the mc would like to see in his harem when he becomes strong enough

GreatDaoofspace:Romance? Harem?
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