The writing quality in itself is good. You can understand the situation of the main character, even the part at the beginning when he was slowly regaining his senses. Every part after that, the rescue and the fight scene were both nice creating an overall wholesome first chapter. I've yet to read the other chapters but from this point I know that it'll be something epic!
Cloki
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