This is great. A nice first pov that makes sense and you can feel the main character and the others as well, I was surprised by this last one. It's pretty hard to keep those two emotions in check so that it doesn't feel one-dimensional. And then the way that the author presented the world didn't feel like an info dump, but you already figured a lot about it. Keep up the good work.
Cloki
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