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Mel_Aniv
Mel_AnivLv44yr
2021-04-21 13:35

The protagonist was likeable and has his emotions fleshed out. It was very nice reading this novel as I saw potential in this author's work. The narration was splendidly done for the readers to easily read and has its immersion within it. Its charm was very good as I saw the story development was in a good pacing. Overall, a nice read! Gotta recommend this to others!

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Cloki
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Nr_Yet1208
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The first thing I noticed was the quality of writing. It was pretty good. The beginning was slow and some part was a little monotonous. But the action started soon enough. Overall it's a well-written story.

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IkuSaari
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The main character is really sharp, yet not too powerful or clever to be relatable. I find this story easy and enjoyable to read due to the fact that the language flows naturally. The central concept is also very intriguing. Everyone loves an underdog story, because there is room for the MC to progress and grow. Great work!

4yr
Jo_J
Jo_JLv13

First of all, the genre it's not my cup of tea, but I have to admit that is a pleasure to read your story. The descriptions are nicely written, the main lead is expressive and the storyline is addictive. Well done! You don't struggle with the language so it's your advantage over the rest (non-English speakers), use it well! All the best!

3yr
Yvcme
YvcmeLv12

Potential massive .....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

3yr
Mineva
MinevaLv14

I don't know what it is about this story that attracted me. It could be the excellent artwork that represents the character and the feel of the story well. It could also be that this is just a great story that deserves your time. Check it out!

3yr
Sonder_Ella
Sonder_EllaLv2

Hi, Your story seems like something I would be nose deep in on a daily basis. Totally loved your writing style and the character development. Happy writing! :)

3yr
miu_hozuki
miu_hozukiLv2

This is the genre I like. So, chances are I am going to be far more forgiving than those who don't like the genre. That being said, the book is good in it's own right. The language is smooth, the story flows neither too fast, nor to slow, it's a compelling read to the end.

3yr
KageMugen
KageMugenLv14

Reviewed after chapter 6: The Pros: Great grammar and pace World building is well developed and fused into the story The Cons: Characters seem a bit flat and accepting the story without any doubts or panic Characters who die so far leave you without any emotional attachment like cannon fodder Idiotic level 7 All in all it was entertaining so far.

4yr
meixiaolian
meixiaolianLv2

How to join Hero Camp? This book is quite interesting to read and when the author write "prey and predators", I never come across to a novel like this before. Author is descriptive enough to let the readers imagine the world where the MC is in.

4yr
Yairy
YairyLv2

I have a soft spot for systems, as they take you away from daily life and bring you into a world you can enjoy. This story's writing is well done, the main character seems interesting too. As this is only the beginning, I'm excited to see where it goes. Thanks for the story so far, author! Best of luck to you!

3yr
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