Great story. The writing quality is impressive. The Stability of updates is normal, but the story development is slow but genuine. There are a lot of scenes funny but deadly serious. Character design lacks more modest and conscription details, but the world-building follows its plot properly. Recommended to be adopted by editors. Support his work until the end of the contest. [img=coins]
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LIKECarlosW20:Still a new author so I'm still working on improving. I appreciate you taking the time to write out this review. Thanks for reading. đ