Review Detail of MissyRailae in Alpha Alehandro

I love how creative and strong the plot is. Your protagonists are super good because they are armored with clear and consistent background like how the female lead constantly portray a food lover. I also like how you establish that chance encounter right off the bat. The only thing I could personally just suggest for further improvement (it's just my opinion, feel free to follow your heart) is writing style. I think you should really use punctuations and language mechanics to your best interest like ellipsis should be only used at certain times to put emphasis or made it more impactful. Overall, keep it up! I feel that there's so much more you could do in this novel as you unleash your writing potential❤️