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TheDecanter
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The premise would have been good if not for the recurring stupid characters and forced plots that happen solely for the mc. Such as being disdained literally by breathing air. And the "coincidental" examination of disciples of which the mc partakes and dominates. What's even ridiculous is that the supposed "geniuses" were nothing but characters with no depth, purely made to act as a pedestal for the mc's glory. They saw the mc easily dealing with the prior opponent but they still underestimate him, it would have been better if they at least have been a little more cautious, but no, they instead fought to be the first to fight the mc calling him "prey." I understand that the mc's abilities have to be showcased every now and then but please, don't do it in a very ludicrous way. Even a toddler would be cautious to a certain degree once a situation takes a turn from what was otherwise expected. In summary, add more depth to the characters and don't force events for the convenience of the mc like "an event that only happens for a century" or "a village attacked out of nowhere, and the mc is put in the position of defending." Make a clear outline of what the characters are, their personalities, abilities, and such. It will help make the characters appear unique among others instead of the usual "opposing and worshipping characters" where they either worship, oppose, or some "ice-cold super genius woman that frowns upon men but was taken aback by the mc's strength hence falls head over heels" cliché. Make the story a little more alive, that's all I'm asking.

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TheDecanter
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For the record, I was actually just adding the "genius beauty falling head over heels towards the mc" as a way to taunt the different clichés of today's novels. Never have I known that it would actually happen as the chapters progress. This novel uses every stupid trope there is, and in a very shameless manner at that.