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assistantLv44yr
2021-04-19 04:44

first of all, don't make this cringe, and second of all give it some slice of life moment to enjoy the world and make the mc have some level of common sense, don't make him like [ you dare to hit me now I kill you literary] don't make him have a harem, and most importantly don't make him unsatisfied with what he gains, make him smart where he uses the most efficient way to increase his power, don't give the skip training instant power moment, in this kind of novel progress of every moment make us happy and make him smart enough to finding new way to make him strong and earn some money. if you are saying that it became suspicious then I will tell you some thing instantly attaining power is more suspicious and if he work other area and work on his power he will gain power and money and most importantly knowledge and experience.

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Ctrl_C_Ctrl_VLv14

Whats the point of u saying it here the author’s not gonna read it, and this is a translation website

Passs3rby
Passs3rbyLv4

same review with eternal tssk2 so obvious that the translator or someone promoting this novel with this move

Elder
ElderLv11

How many accaunts you have... 5 or more? Spaming 5 al the time...

Assistent_X
Assistent_XLv2

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Elder:How many accaunts you have... 5 or more? Spaming 5 al the time...
b0b_1
b0b_1Lv11

Ctrl_C_Ctrl_V:Whats the point of u saying it here the author’s not gonna read it, and this is a translation website
Animecormade
AnimecormadeLv1

This is a translation site

Fealtad
FealtadLv11

true, and even if the author could read this nothing would change

Ctrl_C_Ctrl_V:Whats the point of u saying it here the author’s not gonna read it, and this is a translation website
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