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Review Detail of Malgnad1614 in Disciple, Don't Cause Trouble, Master Won't Leave the Mountain!

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I actually really enjoyed this story initially. The concept was interesting and fairly unique. The mc is invincible in his little domain on a mountain and has to recruit disciples to grow stronger. And to top it off, he is unable to cultivate so he has to somehow teach his disciples without having any experience. However, as of chapter 92 the story goes straight to trash. All of these previous points are suddenly thrown out the window. The mc suddenly appears in a city far from his domain with no explanation. He suddenly has cultivation knowledge out of nowhere. His sect that he just set up not even a month ago now suddenly has a deep and extensive history in that world. In addition, he suddenly has enemies that knows all about him and his sect out of nowhere as well. Do you see the problem here with how many times I said the word "suddenly"? The story basically completely changed with no foreshadowing and no communication on why it happened. It is a real shame too since I did enjoy it before that. TLDR: Story completely changed around chapter 92 and retconned the entire first part.

Disciple, Don't Cause Trouble, Master Won't Leave the Mountain!

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