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Rizky_Amd
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2022-01-08 19:29

Later in chapter 13, the MC will become a slave or a subordinate, even though he has the power to become a ruler. Should have been able to explain this is not why I gave *1 ? .It's useless if the writing is good, the setting is cool, etc., if the plot is sloppy, bad.

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Alessandra12345
Alessandra12345Lv14

I also find that the plot is a little thrown together. The plot was sort of alright for the first 5 chapters, but after that it started to not make sense.

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