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DaoistEg4G6w
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2022-02-19 12:57

The perfect world building and the best non-human MC, i really hate when other non-human MC somehow take Human form and lose the taste of non-human genre, the only problem I have is that there's to many unnecessary and boring development.

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John_Doever
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Random review from the author here mostly to tell readers more of what to expect. This novel is a concept of mine that I wrote when I was starting out as a writer a while back when I wrote mostly to just test things out, but lately, now that I've started to write longer works, I've gotten a creative itch to try to pick this back up. So, without further ado, what to expect from the get go that I feel makes this novel concept a little more unique: System/LitRPG/Evolution- I'll be honest and say I always had a kind of issue with the system genre in that most of the time, many novels have MCs that have a system that seems completely out of place with the established setting which exists solely as a means to make the MC stronger. I wanted to give the 'system' of this novel a more natural feel to it, and as a result, it is simply the evolutionary/upgrading process that the MC, a nonhuman, constantly evolving alien creature much like the zerg from starcraft, uses to consume and evolve with. Which brings me to another point: Non-human MC- I have already written a non-human MC novel on this website, but the more I write it, the more I realize I could have explored the concept a whole lot more instead of having a character that was human at core. Here, the MC is completely inhuman, an alien monster that was bred in a cocoon and meant only to destroy and consume. As a result, it is cold, ruthless, and inhuman in many ways. I do plan on developing this MC's character so that it does not stay the same forever, but I will keep the core of its character as being fundamentally inhuman. It will never, as a result, become human for any extended period of time. That was a long read, but hopefully that was informative. Once again, thanks for reading, and though I hope you as a reader enjoy my writing, I can totally understand if it is not to your liking as well.

Riccy
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When I first read the synopsis and the so-called 'Doever Writing Quality Guarantee', I was taken aback. This author has quite the confidence, borderline arrogance, to publicly state such a thing, and in a synopsis no less! But as I read this novel, and got immersed in it, I realized that such confidence was not unsubstantiated. The grammar, vocabulary, lack of plot holes, and great immersive storytelling made me slowly fall in love. I see most of the novels on this platform as fast food. Most are just cheap and quickly made, just to scratch the itch of the reader and nothing more. This novel is like Five Guys. This is some gourmet burger stuff. I think about it even in my sleep. Like the Author's review says, the system element in this novel fits perfectly in the story's settings. Everything so far makes sense. All the potential questions I've had were answered, and I leave every chapter feeling happy and fulfilled. Every chapter fills me with wondrous world-building and I am oftentimes awed by how big the world is and I am often excited by the prospect of our scary alien friend assimilating it all into the Collective. The chapters are also nice and long. Like Lord of the Mysteries long. It's a huge treat compared to the average novel where they just give the minimum amount of words necessary to make Webnovel and the algorithm happy. My only worry is that this author has another large novel that he's working on. It's currently on hold for this novel because he wants to win the competition. Because of the high word count and the effort that goes into maintaining such a quality of work, I am often scared by the idea that the frequency of chapters will fall. Especially when he inevitably resumes working on his other novel. In conclusion, TL;DR, read this novel, cherish it, and treat it like you would treat your cute 2D anime waifu. With love. I love this novel almost as much as I love her.... almost.

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