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There's something unique about your writing style, which stands out from the chapters you've released. It gets me eager to read more of it, and one point, in particular, stands out. However, it would have been better if the dialogues or scenes were portrayed by showing, not telling. It would have been better if you gave a sense of her personality or seen her action instead of descriptions. But not counting that I got no complaints.

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