Review Detail of RedAdam04 in Tainted Hunger

Good Story! The writing quality is still improving per chapter. The author is making sure that his grammar is in check. For the stability of updates, it is still challenging for him. I can see it through his writings. There are a lot of things needed to fix and loopholes. The story development is slow. There are funny lines and series of conversations between the protagonist and his supporting characters. However, the character design lacks proper descriptions and the author doesn't add more actions for his words. How exactly he wants to do it is in his hands. The world itself has an abundant background and boundless journey, so I judge it fairly. I recommend for the editors and his fans to support this series.