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Overlord_Venus
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The synopsis indeed confused me. Too many names in too few sentences. I still got the gist of it and decided to just read the story. First things first for a good story: Grammar Illusionist has either upgraded her skills or she found an editor. The story flows smoothly, and there aren't any jarring sentences. I didn't find anything grammatically incorrect. Story: We follow the story of three men who are likely the main characters of this story judging by how the plot is progressing. Usually, having multiple main characters ruins the story thanks to the numerous POV shifts. But Illusionist maintains a cohesive POV without disrupting the flow of the story. Character: They weren't cardboard cutouts. From what I read, they are portrayed quite realistically with some fictional quirks. A well-done job to be honest. World background: It is fed in bits and pieces, but is cohesive. Illusionist gives exposition at places where it is desired, nothing more, nothing less. I'm the type of reader that loves to read more about the world too, but that's just my personal preference. Most readers would love this pace and style of setting. TL;DR: Read the first 6 chapters before deciding if this is to your liking or now. I'm sure you have more than enough bait to fall prey to the story by then haha

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The Bullied Husband's Club

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sure man. added it to my library

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hmm, message me on my discord. Will tell there

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