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Tafara
TafaraLv103yr
2021-05-10 21:50

I will give this series not a full 5 star as the series still in its infancy. hopefully it can develop a more develop outlook of the world he lives in. the chara? well, to be honest is still too far from my expectations. as he is already beyond my imagination because he reincarnated too much, I can't connect with him. the foreshadowing is thrown too early and too much. it's reveal something that unnecessary in my opinion. but, it was also something that I'm looking forward. hopefully this series will be executed neatly, because this level of foreshadowing need a higher level of plot and development before it can creates a greater impact in the future. good luck [img=recommend][img=recommend]

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Anit666
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Thanks a lot! You are right about the fact that that particular reveal was written earlier than normal. I did worry about whether to reveal it so early or reserve it for later, but I decided to just send it and include it so early in the game for 2 reasons: 1. Considering the madness that's about to come, that foreshadowing is one of the least important of them all. 2. It grants me more artistic freedom by giving me more ways to manipulate the readers and keep them on the edge of their seats. That said, a word of advice from me, the author; don't take everything everything at face value as not everything is at it seems. As for the main character itself, I want to make the readers connect to him by peeling his layers one at a time. Or I could just go for a Big D play and make you love the villains more than the Heroes. Depends on what I find more amusing, tbh. Just look forward to it.

Anastaxius
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Will Mc get a partner (even without romance but just have a soulmate) or will this be just focused about protagonist raising the regressor?

Anit666:Thanks a lot! You are right about the fact that that particular reveal was written earlier than normal. I did worry about whether to reveal it so early or reserve it for later, but I decided to just send it and include it so early in the game for 2 reasons: 1. Considering the madness that's about to come, that foreshadowing is one of the least important of them all. 2. It grants me more artistic freedom by giving me more ways to manipulate the readers and keep them on the edge of their seats. That said, a word of advice from me, the author; don't take everything everything at face value as not everything is at it seems. As for the main character itself, I want to make the readers connect to him by peeling his layers one at a time. Or I could just go for a Big D play and make you love the villains more than the Heroes. Depends on what I find more amusing, tbh. Just look forward to it.
Anit666
Anit666Author

He may or may not. I haven't decided right now, tho there would be girls who'll fall for him.

Anastaxius:Will Mc get a partner (even without romance but just have a soulmate) or will this be just focused about protagonist raising the regressor?
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