Pretty good so far considering it only has three chapters as of now. I've seen little to no grammer problems and those I've found are fixed the next day or within the hour. The mc is pretty relatable and kinda funny and very honest on top of that. I personally find this story very interesting and that's a good sign seeing as it only has three chapters. Good job Author[img=recommend]

this definitely shiuld be more popular, it's amazing! the writing quality is soo good, oc feels totally natural and belongs, she's smart and fun and also the way that other characters are described and each have a proper backround not just discarded like most authors do (not considering them as mere extras) , i really recommend it and i think it deserves 5 stars👌👍

I suck at reviews despite being a writer myself. All I'll say is that this book seems promising so far and I hope the author continues and has fun with it. The mc is relatable and had my chuckling at the things she has to say about everything. Yeah,that's all I have for now. I really don't know what else to say. this is just a promising book that I'll be following

Calling the series a fan-fic would be too simplistic. yes, the series may be in the "mha" universe. But the book is completely different. first of all we have a real mc. yes you are the "harem" rabid reader (boy?), I'm telling you. mc has a personality and a background. you may not be able to stand it, but mc has character and does not do things against his own character. also the universe is more like a parallel mha universe. If you close your eyes and dive into mha-ff, you may not like it. That's why I like the title of the book more. Is it just mc good? of course no. It's the same with almost all the side characters. no one behaves like npc. I definitely recommend the book. besides that i leave it about 40th chapter. As much as I loved it, I got bored. I got bored of its slow pace and it's because it takes about 50 episodes until you get to the main plot. I think this is the real problem. you write "OriosGrafeas" my friend, you don't have to write ff. You're already as original a writer as possible. if that's a mha-ff. If not, I would have continued. but i don't expect such depth from mha-ff. As I said, the book is very good, considering what I wrote, I recommend it to you.

First off, I'd like to mention that I have reviewed this book before, when there were roughly 30 or so chapters. It was incredible then and it has maintained that level of quality as more chapters are added (57 qs of writing this). This is an incredible story and deserves far more attention than it has received. The characters are well written, the OC's aren't cardboard cutouts, and the dialouge is interesting and well written. The book focuses more on the relationships between characters than flashy fight scenes, which I find refreshing. Stories on this platform with OP self inserts and no personality are a dime a dozen, but giving the characters clearly defined relationships and well paced character growth is much more difficult to do in a realistic way. This story accomplishes that phenomenally. The characters feel fleshed out and the OC's aren't convenient plot devices made to push the MC towards a specific goal. Basically, I really like this story because it takes an approach I think more writers in fanfiction should take: a focus on people and the relationships they form. Also, if the author ends up reading this. This is a really good story, and I honestly believe that if you wanted to, you could write professionally. A fair amount of characters in this fanfic are oc, and they are all well written. I love this story. TLDR: Its good, the characters are fleshed out, and it has stayed consistently interesting as of writing this review.

Good book I love it 👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

This is seemingly good! Budum tshhh🥁🥁🥁ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ

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The story is great and the writing quality is good so far.Nice work author and I'm currently waiting for update.[img=recommend][img=recommend]