Review Detail of MillionaireDaoist in AMELIA, Duchess of House Florence
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Love the way this is written. Its pretty detailed and the characters have depth. Though I wish the chapters were shorter, the beginning is quite long and the paragraphs are chunky, so it takes some time to get into. Otherwise everything else is pretty good 👍
AMELIA, Duchess of House Florence
MICHIKOMIYU
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Thank you for this! I appreciate you taking the time to read it ❤️ I love reading old literature, so i somewhat adapted the sort of traditional writing style (and have been told like so a lot of times) with lengthy chapters and mouthful of descriptions. i thought that if i divide it, I'd be well on my way past 60chaps, but i can't get myself to shorten them 😅 i admit that it needs a little time for the story to sink into the reader since its rather slow-paced. So i hope that whoever reads it would have the patience to be with the characters through their journey ❤️❤️❤️
I love old literature too, its okay 😃 it wasn't meant as criticism. I'm just telling you what books here tend to do. Believe it or not, 60+ would be good (I know its the same content and it sounds silly) 🧐 but you do attract more readers with more chapters. But as the author you should do whatever feels right for you, I'll keep reading anyway 🥰
MICHIKOMIYU:Thank you for this! I appreciate you taking the time to read it ❤️ I love reading old literature, so i somewhat adapted the sort of traditional writing style (and have been told like so a lot of times) with lengthy chapters and mouthful of descriptions. i thought that if i divide it, I'd be well on my way past 60chaps, but i can't get myself to shorten them 😅 i admit that it needs a little time for the story to sink into the reader since its rather slow-paced. So i hope that whoever reads it would have the patience to be with the characters through their journey ❤️❤️❤️
Yes, I noticed that too. It's my first time using this platform and was surprised by the number of chapters 😅 Still, thank you for reading my story. It makes me happy to receive feedbacks since it lets me know that people are actually reading it 💗 and it's also nice to connect to readers like this 🥰 stay safe and healthy always!
MillionaireDaoist:I love old literature too, its okay 😃 it wasn't meant as criticism. I'm just telling you what books here tend to do. Believe it or not, 60+ would be good (I know its the same content and it sounds silly) 🧐 but you do attract more readers with more chapters. But as the author you should do whatever feels right for you, I'll keep reading anyway 🥰