webnovel
THE_WORDSMITH
THE_WORDSMITHLv24yr
2021-04-16 23:29

The story is emotional. I can feel the pang of sorrow in my heart as I read it. The author did a good job in portraying how a father loves his children and the bond of two young siblings is very well defined too. The scene description also provides you a vivid picture as you imagine the story in your mind. The only two things that kind of irked me were the name transitions. It is okay for royalty to have a long name, but I would prefer to read the name which is simple enough to remember. I hope the author won't kill me. I am looking forward to the future chapters.

Liked by 1 people

LIKE
empty img

No replies. Be the first!

Other Reviews
Related Stories

The Masked prince

"It was a game of survival." The great Empire of Alfaros was in chaos. Prince Regan was returning from the battlefield after four years. Years ago, he used to be the most beautiful prince of the Empire. Ironically, the same prince was today known as The Masked Prince. It is said that he had a huge scar on his face, a face that used to be very beautiful. The scar was so horrifying that the Emperor got scared when he saw it and sent him away to the battlefield. But the war was over. And he was to return. . . . Looking at the green eyes that didn't even flicker at the sight of his scarred face, Regan was filled with a surprise for a moment. At the same time, something flashed in his cold eyes when he saw how calm she looked. "What is your name?" "Evelyn, Your Highness" "Evelyn..." Regan tasted the name on his lips. His red eyes looked at her face which was completely blank and he said "Evelyn, you will be my personal slave from today on." Evelyn looked calm. However, as time passed, Evelyn realized that Regan wanted more. Much more than she could give him. She tried to stop him. But what would she do when the prince forcefully put his heart into her hands and was adamant about taking hers? Will Evelyn then choose to move away or to move on? Especially at the time when horrors of her past shadow her heart __________ This story is a part of the contest so if you enjoy reading, please support to encourage the author. In return, I assure you that the plot will not disappoint you because it is full of turns and twists. Cover is mine. Made by: Lay Lee

Ada_5253 · History
4.8
291 Chs