Review Detail of whitethief274 in Marvels SuperMutant
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well this is not 5 star material obviously because of some cringey moments and prologue of this story . Prologue was too messed up seriously . I can understand witing is not essay because I tried so good work good story keep it up maybe after this ff your next one will be super hit. don't drop try to end this
Marvels SuperMutant
shawn_anderson
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well your story your choice but still keep up the good work take some ideas from other FFs in the long run those ideas will be helpful try to be on stable side of the story don't make him too op so soon that he started taking boss level villians like galactus just ask readers if you stuck somewhere but do what you like the most
shawn_anderson:thanks bud. I hope I can reach more of the readers as I go. Maybe I just delete first chapter idk.