so yeah I got three chapters into it and couldn't go any further it's just a constant beatdown on Tyrone like anything that can go wrong did go wrong and I just don't see that as entertaining other people may find the suffering of someone entertaining but not me.

Let me tell you about my novel: Honestly, I think my novel is amazing. You won't have an instantly OP MC and the first twenty chapters are in my Own Authentic Marvel Universe before the MC moves on to the MCU or Earth 199999. Earth 616 is the main marvel Universe and not the one in the movies. So there is a bit of knowledge for you all. Give my novel a read, chapters are long but upload is slow. But as long as you comment, review, rate and vote... then I will increase the number of uploads per week.

Honestly, I really enjoyed reading this so far, but as many others said, I don't think I would physically be able to read it if they get back together. I also like that you chose to write about a more obscure Marvel character. I am excited to read more of this.

Good...................................................................................... Keep...................................... it up

Brazilian here, so if you want to know my opinion put this in the translator: Primeiro, antes de se deixarem levar pelos primeiros capitulos leiam com atenção, não se prendam a normalidade das novelas onde tudo vai bem e ter certeza vocês vão ficar irritados (pra não dizer em outras palavras), mas mesmo assim, como algo tão simples quanto um romance poderia os deixar irritados, como o enredo apesar de macabro parece ter aquela pequena gota? Assim como suas vidas e toda a merda diária se limita a um pouco de felicidade em um mar de desgraça? nem mesmo alguma vontade de ver o desenrolar disso ou como ele poderia se virar? se ele poderia por acaso ir contra toda essa merda e finalmente, ferrar com tudo? imaginem só, perder esse enredo simplesmente por que não conseguir esperar ou por que criticaram o autor sem mesmo acompanhar o desenvolvimento do personagem ou da história .... vi muita gente abandonando um romance e o que digo? ja vai tarde. essa novela é ótima e quem perde são vocês por não poderem ler essa beleza.

THE STability of update is terrible, but other than that this is very good, If yall have read Unbound familar or everything will be my way, well this is sorta similar in a sense that nothing ever goes the mcs way at first and the mc is definitly not winning and mc suffers alot to get a win, the character interactions are very on point its crazy, like each character has a reason for being the way they are, unlike those other chinese cultivation novels where every who isnt a friend of the mc is a bad guy or looks down on the mc and stuff like that, this is sorta immersive, I just wish the author will put the translation for when some characters speak different languages, but thank God for paragraph comments and the blessed ppl that help in translating it sometimes.

a perfect mixture of depravity and drama and love enjoyed the prologue but then unnecessary elements were added but i just tell you this author i am master of psychology and your words almost brought out the darkness in me in a good way and your theories are beautiful looking forward to your works from now on it was a great read till now

this is my first time writing a review on web novel after many years of using it, but the story is kind of addictive it keeps you wanting to know what happens next. overall it got good writing a bit slow but a great story

I personally am enjoying this novel. It's a fresh take by using characters that most authors have set up as background or side characters, and putting them into the forefront. The main character really is trying to do his best given the VERY harsh blocks being thrown at him (I'm really hoping he gets his due for going through all that) and is still trying to move forward, which i like. The writing is really well done with very few errors (which is a big plus for me lol). The story development is really moving forward and leaves me looking forward to each new chapter. World background? Well they do go to multiple places but the author gives ample descriptions of the environments and what is happening around the characters so that's also a plus. Only thing is the updates. It's not consistent, but given the amount of planning and thought required and that's been put in this story so far, it's understandable why it's not consistent. I just hope you keep going author and don't drop this story!