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noobageddon_
noobageddon_Lv133yrnoobageddon_

Its good and all, but author should get a editor or a proofreader. Words are often miss spelled and some words are missing that reading a paragraph is kinda confusing sometimes. Especially for a reader that only watch a couple of seasons that a sentence with a misspeled or a missing word can be super confusing. Its kinda ok at the beginning, but after ch 9. With the mess fast phase and no proper time skip(author only say ‘couple of months, couple of days’ that its confusing if a yr has past or why) combines with the misspelled and missing words. I become fedup with it that the story become allover the place to me.

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Druid in GoT

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noobageddon_Lv13noobageddon_

Ohh, the misspelled words become a different world entirly, but the pronunciation are simmilar. Like phase -> paste or something like that.