Its good and all, but author should get a editor or a proofreader. Words are often miss spelled and some words are missing that reading a paragraph is kinda confusing sometimes. Especially for a reader that only watch a couple of seasons that a sentence with a misspeled or a missing word can be super confusing. Its kinda ok at the beginning, but after ch 9. With the mess fast phase and no proper time skip(author only say ‘couple of months, couple of days’ that its confusing if a yr has past or why) combines with the misspelled and missing words. I become fedup with it that the story become allover the place to me.
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