Item: Devilish Alpha Davil Duncan
Rating: 4.8
Author: hansora

hansoraLv143yr

2021-05-03 09:53

The idea of mermaids and wolves is good but I was a bit distracted with the unedited words like the using of capital letters and whatnot. Nevertheless, this is a new story for me because I love both mermaids and wolves tale. Keep it up!

Devilish Alpha Davil Duncan

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