Good start and fast development of events. Clear and attentive detailing of the world and descriptions of the characters are pleasant to read. I hope to meet an unexpected storyline turn and get a strong impression. Good luck author. thanks for the fantasy.

Pretty good writing. Like every one else, I enjoyed the uniqueness of the pairing. Good luck with your writing and keep on it typing away!!!

Oooh.. This story is pretty interesting so far. Was adella very protective of Vepar purely because of her extreme beauty? Does adella's hubby know that his daughter is of illegitimate birth? I am interested to know how the story unfolds. Too bad the chapters are so short! Love the background of the story so far. More chapters please author-san.

This novel has a lot of potential. I really enjoyed reading it and definitely adding it to my library! Great imagery, and excellent clarification when it came to characters and their personalities and traits. This is good to do at the beginning of the novel so the reader can focus on the story and character development later on. Remember to try to separate those long paragraphs into shorter ones (I usually go for 2-4 sentences then skip a line) as most of our readers are reading this on their phones/tablets and want it to be read like a book not a newspaper. Again, an incredible job, this is going to be legendary!

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This is new. A mermaid and werewolf. I'm intrigued . I really liked the first and second chapter . [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

The background is on point including everything else. Vebar is also very beautiful for the eye. This is a best mating combination ever[img=fp][img=coins][img=update]

This is enchanting. Vepar means a strong mermaid that controls the sea . I like this[img=coins][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=update][img=recommend]

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interesting and on point. I need an update soon else I don't know what might happen to me[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]