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Review Detail of Mako_Mako in Let's Imagine a Female Knight from Another World

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Mako_Mako
Mako_MakoLv112yrMako_Mako

OK. So my review may be a bit biased since this is the only book I come to this site to read, HOWEVER I had to make a second review due to my love for the world Winter creates growing stronger and stronger with each page. Writing Quality: There may be a few errors here and there, however, when it comes to wordplay she can't be beat! I love the way she uses different sound effects and examples so her words cannot only be visualized, but also felt, smelt, and heard. Story Development: AAAH. ITS AMAZING! Like, it's so interesting how you THINK something will happen but it doesn't turn out that way. Like at first I thought.. "Ok, so she's going to go on an adventure to get her powers or something" WRONG. "Is *bleep* going to meet *bleep* and form some type of team to defeat *bleep* WRONG. Not only that, but the plot unfolds vividly and the world grows bigger as more questions emerge. Character Design: EVERY. SINGLE. CHARACTER. IS. DIFFERENT. Personality, clothes, hair, likes and dislikes, you get them all! she points pictures of how characters look from their eyes to their shoes. The way she explains how the people are feeling without actually saying what they're feeling is like genius. You'll literally fall in love or get interested with one or many of the characters in this book, I guarantee it. Updating Stability: At first it was fine... But she kinda stopped, she explained in the disc that she was doing uni stuff but she's started to pick it up again. I hope she continues with the usual 1-2 chaps with bonus chaps via powerstones. World Background: OK, NOW IF YOU SKIPPED EVERYTHING ELSE, READ THIS!!! The world building alone, is probably the best reason to read this book. why? She does an exciting job at creating multiple stories within one story. Everyone came from somewhere, things happen for specific reasons, nothing gets left-out, and they're specifics that get explained in detail. Even the magic in the book just didn't come out of nowhere, it came from *bleeeeeeeep* like that's so freaking creative! Conclusion: This book, honestly could be split into like several as all of the characters are intriguing and could go off on their own adventures and it would still be interesting. Her action scenes are vivid, she enters comedy for relief, a bit of romance all with a lot of blood and gore that catches my eye and makes me gag! If you want a story that's DEFINETLY going to be made into an anime or manga one day, start reading now so you can say that you were one of the first to enjoy this incredible adventure. p.s. My favorite character is Saori because I feel sad that she became *bleep* after her *bleep* died and she's so loveable! (she's the pink-haired girl in the book cover).

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Let's Imagine a Female Knight from Another World

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Mako_Mako
Mako_MakoLv11Mako_Mako

what're friends for! ❤❤❤ also, she's your favorite character? for sure thought it would be, *beep* (rhymes with Maray).

WinterTimeCrime:mmkk. You are going to make me cry; Thank you for all the lovely messages you send to my Insta and this review really made me emotional. Like you were here when I started on IV Translations and decided to give English a shot on here. It really means a lot that you put an effort into your review and are genuinely enjoying my story. Readers like you are the reason I stay up late looking up outfits to describe, names from different cultures, and civilizations to grasp so I can create something beautiful and new. So, from the bottom of my heart, thank you. 😍 I look forward to your many question-paragraphs via Discord. 😉 P.S. And, yes! Updates will continue, thank you for your patience! 🙏 P.S.S. Since your already several chapters ahead... My favorite character is *bleep* because of her fixation for *bleep*. Name rhymes with Fazistu.
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WinterTimeCrime
WinterTimeCrimeAuthorWinterTimeCrime

mmkk. You are going to make me cry; Thank you for all the lovely messages you send to my Insta and this review really made me emotional. Like you were here when I started on IV Translations and decided to give English a shot on here. It really means a lot that you put an effort into your review and are genuinely enjoying my story. Readers like you are the reason I stay up late looking up outfits to describe, names from different cultures, and civilizations to grasp so I can create something beautiful and new. So, from the bottom of my heart, thank you. 😍 I look forward to your many question-paragraphs via Discord. 😉 P.S. And, yes! Updates will continue, thank you for your patience! 🙏 P.S.S. Since your already several chapters ahead... My favorite character is *bleep* because of her fixation for *bleep*. Name rhymes with Fazistu.

WinterTimeCrime
WinterTimeCrimeAuthorWinterTimeCrime

ok let's settle down these are spoilers 😆 🤣 😂

Mako_Mako:what're friends for! ❤❤❤ also, she's your favorite character? for sure thought it would be, *beep* (rhymes with Maray).
Michele_Mays_7238
Michele_Mays_7238Lv12Michele_Mays_7238

great job