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I came from his previous works such as Lady of Labelle and Queen of Queens on Medium and Novella. To say the very least, they haven't lost his touch. - Writing Quality: Very elegant imagery. As a person who's very keen on surroundings and location while reading a story (think J.R.R. Tolkien), I like this author because they're precise about what's going around the characters. I enjoyed reading about the "manga sword" in C2, it was weird but I could see it vividly. Story Development - It seems we're only at the part where characters are being introduced and the setting is being described. Hard to say where this will lead, however, I feel someone or something is going to do a 360. Character Design - Hard to say so far, but they have me intrigued with characters like Momoko (pervertedness and shyness) and Obara (seems like a jokester). If this is truly Isekai, I wonder how they'll shape the story in the next world. I like how Momoko's perception and thoughts are laid out for the reader to interpret. Knowing the author, it starts off quite linear however they add some type of weird twist on the protagonist that's unusual. Momoko seems a bit pervy so who knows. World Background (I'm guessing this means location?) - The synopsis says she's average so when she's describing the world around her it all seems a bit lackluster, it may just be me. The protag is apparently going to an entirely new world so maybe his pictorial story-telling is used better there (and honestly in a new place like a town the reader needs a good description of what it looks like anyway). It's to soon to tell. All in all, great start, need more, good luck!

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Let's Imagine a Female Knight from Another World

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WinterTimeCrime
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Thanks for checking out my work and being supportive of my transition to WebNovel! An even bigger thank you for your analysis. I didn't know I had all of my characters had something weird about the-. 😳 Actually, never mind! XDDD Onward!

JayBird_TellEm
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Yeaaah I was about to say -- Leona from Queen of Queens was kinda sus LOL.

WinterTimeCrime:Thanks for checking out my work and being supportive of my transition to WebNovel! An even bigger thank you for your analysis. I didn't know I had all of my characters had something weird about the-. 😳 Actually, never mind! XDDD Onward!
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You got me there 😭😭😭

JayBird_TellEm:Yeaaah I was about to say -- Leona from Queen of Queens was kinda sus LOL.