Although not perfect, I can claim that the story has a nice start. Needs more feeling from the author for the readers to cope up with ideas inside the book. (Sometimes the more you love reading, grammars don't need to be perfect, the plot doesn't need to be new and unique, as long as they could cope up with your feeling, and felt every word, that would be the greatest weapon of success) Have a great journey towards success.
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