Very good, I really enjoyed the fanfic, I'm looking forward to more, I don't understand people's rights complaining about the grammar for me it's great but it doesn't take much notice since I'm just a person with a different opinion, when he used GEAR FOURTH in nomu I'll talk as a fan of the accompanying one piece I got goosebumps remembering the doflamingo's bow when luffy used it for the first time in a real fight, it was really cool it passed the same feeling in the doflamingo's fight I was very excited but the fourth gear wasn't as hard as it should have last this is the only part i was sad about well i hope you use fourth snakeman and tankman gear and maybe new moves that luffy could have invented, well it would be hard since luffy is a genius at turning his fruit into a hitting business face to face with kaidou, well look forward to more releases.
TheDark_Lord
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