It's bad. Grammar wasn't good, the characters are poorly written and extremely two-dimensional. The idea is pretty good but the execution is poor, mc just copies Luffy without putting in any effort there wasn't a single line about him training he just 'mastered' 2nd and 3rd gear. I added +1 star to every category for the 'no harem' tag lol.
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