I will be blunt: this story is utter trash. The grammar and vocabulary is terrible, and the format is closer to a screenplay than a novel. The plot is essentially a canon rehash. The main character attempts to be edgy but only comes across as a spineless loser without the will to act on his thoughts. Having a DF power is an interesting idea, but rather than making an original DF or using an existing DF in new and creative ways, he copies Luffy's powerset without importing over Luffy's personality or any of the work Luffy had to put in to earn those skills. Basically, the author took 2 settings and mixed them up in such a sloppy and unimaginative manner that he ended up with something far less than the sum of its parts.
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