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Review Detail of mingapur in Yggdrasil's Pupil

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I am now beyond the 100 chapter mark and it is time for a review. The first thing to mention is that this story has a unique writing style which seemingly directly represents the turbulent sometimes also jumpy thoughts of the main character. A special mention to the fun forest characters that all seemingly have absurd quirks. The story didn't quite hit my sense of humor but I stil enjoyed and read everything posted up to now. Everyone has different humor so I wouldn't take this as a negative point. The antics and turbulent life of the MC still make me smile for their creative nature. Interestingly there are some deeper questions about morals and some modern critique hidden in some chapters and some are really emotionally touching. To summarize, the main reason I enjoyed reading as much as I did is that the story is told in an emotionally acessible way and takes you on an adventure with all it's quirks. Now for some critique. Due ti the nature of the writing, some chapters make no real progress in the MC's adventure and rather tell about him stuck in his mind. This is mot necessarily negative but I still felt it was a bit much at times. This also meant that for now the world discovery (anount we know a bout the worldbuilding) is very slow. It's hard to propperly critique the worldbackground since I have yet to know what it is. Eventhough the MC ask himself loads of questions in his head he rarely finds actual answers. On the other hand I think the author does have the world planned out because the little we got to know for now is a solid foundation without contradictions. That's it for my overly thurogh review. Many thanks for publishing your book for us to read, it takes curage and dedication. Keep going, you're doing great!

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Very comprehensive review , thank you 😁