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Review Detail of moonstarhaven in REBIRTH OF THE QUEEN

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moonstarhavenLv142yrmoonstarhaven

Honestly speaking, this book has so much potential its just that whenever something happened it will go flashback to the skipped scene which is really annoying if it continues to be like it. It's much better to detailed it according to the event or scene since it was already there, but jumping to a scene the do flashback of the previous scene which could also be a proper scene, will tend to get confusing. it doesn't add up to what we call hidden scene. Over all, this book is good just need some retouch and it will be even better.

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REBIRTH OF THE QUEEN

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thank you for the review dear.. I as a writer will try to be better in the future...

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moonstarhavenLv14moonstarhaven

I like your story so far😊😊, keep up the good work 💪👍👍