Super average characters that fit common tropes with a underused system ability that has not been stress tested and mostly ignored by the MC, pick up statistics and public trading books already (or hacking lol). Having the kaleidoscope sisters is unique and interesting. Stuff happening to the smallest Yoko would set alarms off in public schools in the USA, so world background takes a hit; lots of cellphones and no video evidence? I will continue to follow.
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LIKECan't edit it now and it has not been censored. Anyway, I am from areas that use 'castle doctrine' and keeping records for instant proof is common, this is doubly so when kids get hurt. This story is like many many stories that are just a pale reflection of reality.
Cneep:You make good points, but there are definitely spoilers in your review so please put a warning at the start