Wow, the concept was amazing! I am deeply moved by my imaginative thoughts. I hope the author will update the initial chaps as they tend to be typo-heavy chap. As the other review swappers have said. Start your paragraphs with capital letters and end with periods or commas, question marks or exclamation. Comma if an active convo or period if it was the end of convo. Don't forget to also put (") quotation marks in the dialogues. Typos needed to be edited as soon as possible. 😉 Good luck with the spirity contest! I hope to see yours there!
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