Review Detail of trudny1 in The Shadow Soul System(DC)

Review as of chapter 42. Rating: 4,6 This novel has very high potential. Author isn't relying on plot from the canon of DxD to drive the story. Now, why 4,6 instead of pure 5,0: Every chapter has at least 1 grammatical error, but it doesn't make it unreadable, you can easily infer the intent behind the writing. Example of those mistakes: incorrect usage of your and you're (at the bottom for author I will shortly describe which one to use where), incorrectly written word, or using an incorrect word (example: "you are very tough" vs "you are very though"). My other gripe would be that the romantic/emotional development of some female protagonists towards MC wasn't fully shown but just told that 'it happened' (Esdeath and Akeno). Overall the novel shows great promise with few issues that don't take away from the overall experience. We use "your" when we describe someones possession - for example: your dog, your pokemon, your pen, your anger, your death energy. We use "you're" when we describe someones state of being: you're angry, you're done for, you're victorious, you're dead. Hope this helps.