Review Detail of Niggross in The Shadow Soul System(DC)
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TLDR version : writing is fine, character development is weird, story feels rushed. I like the concept but it's abit jarring to read, The mc gets reincarnated and immediately starts killing people (after a young master interaction), there was no indication that he was a psychopath beforehand, and the fact he doesn't even acknowledge the consequences that'll occur later. The writing itself is fine, but I personally find the character and his mannerisms, what's the word? Edgy. I mean black trench coats and such. Of course some people enjoy that but this is my review [img=faceslap] Anyway, hope my critique helps, looking forward to see what else you come up with.
The Shadow Soul System(DC)
BlackSwordman1234
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that's fine, personally it'd be less weird for me if he had a reason to own something like that, perhaps it's made from the skin of s Taurus demon or something. also I'd encourage you to remember character development, motivations, etc. anyway, I'll look forward to your other projects
BlackSwordman1234:Being brutally honest I'm writing just stuff that I think are cool. Black trench coat, yung master act, all things I think are cool. I know some peaple think it is edgy and weird, but it's just a jumbled mess of things I find cool. It is also my practice run.