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Review Detail of uncledavie in I'll show you a Villain

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Writing Qualtiy: Above average. Author does make some grammatical mistakes, particularly in the beginning, such as run on sentences, but overall very readable. Author does a good job at painting a complete picture with her words, and conveying her thoughts onto paper. At no point did I have any trouble understanding what was going on. Story Development: Good. It's still a bit early to judge this, but so far I'm pretty entertained by everything going on in the story. One thing I will say is that things are going a bit too smoothly for the MC as of now, but with the way the story has been going I expect that to change pretty soon. Looking forward to the intrigue. Character Design: Great. This is probably the best aspect of this novel. Alot of novels out there incorporate a villian mc into their stories, but usually they either get watered down with time or were never that good to begin with. Its probably one of the most frustrating experiences as a reader, to pick up a good novel, with a good villian, and then somehow have the villian turn into the hero/a supporting character as the story progresses. It's like they either die the villian or live long enough to become the hero! Now although I do expect character development, I dont think that at any point of this story will we, the readers, consider the mc to be a "good" guy. So hurray for consistency. Overall, one of the best and most genuine "villian characters" I've ever had the displeasure to read about. Five stars lol. Updating Stability: Meh. At this point in time it's been five days since the last chapter update, which is depressing considering the quality of this novel. If the story ever increases in popularity I imagine update frequency will increase. More chaps plz. World Background: Good. The world background of this story isn't anything particularly special, but it does fit well with the other elements of the story and is basically as close as possible a reader can get to "original" on this site/app. No complaints.

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I'll show you a Villain

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uncledavie
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No problem. Your mental health definitely takes priority to my entertainment. Hope you get better soon.

M_Lexi2:Sorry for the inconsistent chapter updates. Kinda just depressed.
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Sorry for the inconsistent chapter updates. Kinda just depressed.