Review Detail of Swiftescape in I'll show you a Villain

2nd Review cause why not. This won't be as in-depth as the previous one. I only want to touch on one thing that I felt needed to be said. Author you set-up a nice story with an evil protagonist. Now follow through with it, show us his actions and how it affects others around him. Show us how his enemies and possible allies feel about him. Show us this world and how the protagonist navigates throughout the setting. And finally keep your promise and... Show Us A VILLAIN