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Anony_Mous_1902
Anony_Mous_1902Lv33yr
2021-05-30 00:58

I am speechless as to what to write here... All I can say is that... GO READ THE STORY! Is is the description, the character development, the dialogues, I don't even know what is not good abou the story... This is one of the stories that makes writer question their writing skill... Just try it and thank me later... I know you will thanks me later. And please, keep the update flowing, it is highly needed

The Hunter's Mark

slevink
4.9
234 Chs

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slevink
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Thank you so much for reading my story. I hope you guys like it. Any constructive feedback or reviews are appreciated. I do mass release depending on the number of votes. Will announce more later. Enjoy!

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Colleneee
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This novel is interesting! More chapters, please! I love how the author put so much effort to write this story. Keep writing author, you're doing great!

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hungrykoala
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abacaxi
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The_Cheshire_Cat
The_Cheshire_CatLv11

This novel has lots of potential even when it firstly seems like a cliche type it drifts apart from it very soon. The writing quality is great and there is very well created world background and the characters are well created also.

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sojosbreakfast
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Worth passing by. 💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞 Hope Mal and Sky got together 💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞 💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞 💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞 💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞 💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞

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HighBloodWave
HighBloodWaveLv3

Born weak but the main character is still strong. Not bad. Still not that many chapters. If you do mass release I will be very happy. But well, will review again later.

3yr
mrant12
mrant12Lv2

Great job author. I like the story very much. I tried the first chapter, and got slightly interested. Went on to the second, and boom. Hooked. Well done! Can't wait for the next chapter to be released! I am sure you will do very well if you do not give up.

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Ice_Witch
Ice_WitchLv2

The narration and dialogues are good and neat !! story can use more world building as it was difficult to picture the scenes... also introduction of many characters in the first chapter can be avoided for ease of understanding... very good creativity and imagination from the author !! Good work!

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