The first scene is epic! Although it's short, it is still enough to convey the story. The rest of the chapters (Starting with Ether) brings it a whole new level! I love the way you make the dialogues of the novel. It looks natural, and even epic at most times! [img=recommend]
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LIKEThank you! I will be reading your works when I have the time off from my chapters too! I will bombard you with comments on your novel! hohohoohoh
Campoccino:Thank youuu btw I'm a fan of your work now lol. I'll be reading it to relax whenever writing becomes stressful.