The story development and character design is trash. In story development, there is no foreshadowing whatsoever. The synopsis is also misleading cause you'll think he will hatch a snake and evolve it afterwards right? WRONG!! He got the twin headed snake from the very beginning. The character design is also bad. There is also no foreshadowing when he introduces character. Plus the logic is all messed up. You will think that a beast egg from a wasp will turn into a wasp right? WRONG AGAIN! Its random. However this is still acceptable, but what about the lack of risks? When he hatched two more divine beast eggs you'll think there's some sort of risk like imploding right? WRONG AGAIN! No risk mentioned whatsoever. The goldfinger is also very vauge. The functions should have been mentioned earlier on. The background information of MC should also be mentioned earlier on. I still don't know how he got to this world. The MCs goldfinger has very good potential if executed and written properly, but sadly its bad. Its okay to read I guess but not a quality read. Overall good idea, but trashy execution.
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The idea is good the consistency is poor but the story itself is not that bad.As most things are explained to an extent as for your assumption that the imploding happens then why would it implode? He followed the required upgrade materials so of course it would work. Yes I get the lack of consistency sucks but over all the story itself isn't bad. As for plot armor that's in like 80% of all books so don't go there with that it's not a factor.
