webnovel

Review Detail of godkingazeroth in Xianxia: I Can Download Fully Levelled Abilities

Review detail

godkingazeroth
godkingazerothLv22yrgodkingazeroth

the story drags events worthy of one or two chapters into almost 50 or 60 the concept of the story is fine but the mc has no real essence or personality and doesnt really bring forth any connection that could join me as reader with the protagonist. conversations between characters have been added in abrupt places which really mess with the flow of the story. many subsequent chapters feel like they should have been released the prior ones as atleast chronological order would be maintained. the system on the other hand is definitely a cool concept. i would recommend this novel if it stopped going round and round in circles in some parts and then speeding unreasonably in others. it often feels like some chapters were added just to repeat what happened in the previous chapter. i dont think anyone wants a summary of the previous chapter in the current one. in comparison other system novels on here are far better written.

Xianxia: I Can Download Fully Levelled Abilities

Annual Ruthlessness

Liked by 3 people

LIKE
empty img

No replies. Be the first!