Review Detail of midnight_bloom in PENANCE

Great writing!!! Authir has a good way of unfolding the story in a myster-filled but exciting way. There's also humor incorporated and there's actions and emotions too. I'd like to point out, though, sometimes there's shift in tense from past to present (I'm guilty of it too). Other than that, prose is pretty much way above most in this platform. Premise is also great. Keep on writing, author. This is awesome.