Review Detail of TheusDao in Overcoming Chaos

Hello there. Author here, with self promotion. This is my first ever novel, and I hope it intrigues you. If you find anything inconsistent, have ideas for plots or subplots or anything you'd like to be changed and or added in this novel, please leave a comment. Cause I'd love to create a story, that is not only mine, but also takes input from the audience. So far I have a vague idea of where I wanna take this, but since most of you are "Novel Veterans" I would love to hear your opinions as well. - Wish you the best of reads TheusDao