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Review Detail of Dokken in Murim Recurve

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Dokken
DokkenLv142yrDokken

A good story for sure and the writing is excellent, but it is one og the slowest progression in a story I have come. A bit like reading the "LotR" books. 1 chapter of story, 3 chapter of explenation of the world and how thing works, and after 200 chapters I had to give up. I like the story and the MC, bit I felt the development of what i would call "the second MC" became too cheesy and OP and destroyed my immerson i felt for the main MC. Do not take that AS negative critisim, cuz the story and everything is good and Wells fleshed out, but after a while and how the character focuse devloped, it was not my cup of tea anymore. I like when i can immerse in one character. That keeps everything else more mysterious and thrilling for me.

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