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Dokken
DokkenLv143yr
2021-11-26 21:08

A good story for sure and the writing is excellent, but it is one og the slowest progression in a story I have come. A bit like reading the "LotR" books. 1 chapter of story, 3 chapter of explenation of the world and how thing works, and after 200 chapters I had to give up. I like the story and the MC, bit I felt the development of what i would call "the second MC" became too cheesy and OP and destroyed my immerson i felt for the main MC. Do not take that AS negative critisim, cuz the story and everything is good and Wells fleshed out, but after a while and how the character focuse devloped, it was not my cup of tea anymore. I like when i can immerse in one character. That keeps everything else more mysterious and thrilling for me.

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Cover - Checked✓ Synopsis - Checked✓ First 3 chaps - Checked✓ Update stability - Checked✓ Quality - Checked✓ The cover is outstanding, I love it very much. The syno**is is short, to-the-point and ends with a question, not only that but the last question of synopsis makes me curious about WHAT? it forced me to read the first chapter. As of the chapters, very good narration, excellent use of vocabulary and outstanding way of portraying scenes. I like the character Re'Kha, she is so strong both mentally and physically, the five star is for her. The update stability will never let you down. The author writing quality can't be judged by my review. Read this book or Psychic Parasite of our Author to know how remarkable the story quality is. Overall, I give 11/10 ( ◜‿◝ )♡

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I have failed to notice any faults with the technical competency. The writing is of a high quality. The story development and character design is hard to comment on. This is due to the present lacking amount of chapters. The world background however, I think was well-made. The book offered an intriguing start, hinting at a vast and unexplored world. It is a fresh breath of air, considering how original the idea is. At least it appeared very original to me. A thumbs up for the creativity. I also liked how straight on the book/webnovel started. Instead of starting in a safe house in the woods, or waking up in a safe cave, I was thrown straight into the action. I am not quite sure if this one is my cup of tea, but I believe the story holds a lot of promise.

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Unique world with a unique magic system. The terms we've heard before but they have different interactions and setups. The early chapters are confusing because there's no explanation, you're thrown in the deep end and expected to just get carried by the tide till you understand, which you will. It's several chapters before you understand the MC isn't human, but I'm over 30 in and I don't know what makes her different then a human, that hasn't been explained yet. Well, she has blue hair.... Some of the action scenes are confusing, they are detailed but they don't make a lot of sense when you picture it. You just have to suspend your disbelief.

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