I love the storyline of the FL trying to forge a different path for herself. However, it is a little difficult to read when the gender pronouns change for he to she or her to him, etc. Without the right pronouns, it’s hard to follow what is really going on when the pronouns are not correct. I also love the side stories of the other characters, but it can be hard to follow with the storyline of the FL and ML because of how they are split from chapter to chapter or within a chapter. For example, there was one chapter that mainly focused on the FL’s mother, and the chapter sorta ended with a cliffhanger, but the continuation of this chapter was seen at least a couple of chapters later, where the main storyline sorta move on a lot, making the timing weirdly off.
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