Ok so first of I really enjoy how your charcter is developing but something to take as a suggestion would be his lovers i would say pick 1 or 2 people and have them stick with him until they age then repeat, or he grants them immortality. Most harem stories get dropped quick cause writers just do the same cliche over and over with no new spice added.
True_Noblesse
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LIKEughh don't try to make MC lovers die old so they can be replaced with new ones, I've read and still read that type of story, stories get repetitive and annoying because she can prevent her lover from dying of age but she let them die because of stupid things like everyone will die in the end.
True_Noblesse:Actually, I have plan on having Pyrrha go with him from RWBY and of course, he can boost their lifespan but I would not say the reason now since that'll be spoilers. Just ignore what I said, its just my ranting. But thanks for the review and please suggest some future lover for himđ